People say that a child success is dependent on the way parents bring them up. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that the young generation's success depends on how
parents
bring them up while others say that, it depends on
children
's luck or on the way they're working on themselves. Personally, I agree with the statement that a
child
's success depends on him or her. It is true that
children
raised with good parenting can have a healthy
life
but
this
does not always lead to a successful
life
. Because most mediocre
parents
want their
children
to be respectful and hardworking.
For instance
, if a
child
studies hard he or she will be a doctor, which leads to a successful
life
but not all
children
want that
life
.
As a result
, most young generation drops off school to find they way to succeed.
Therefore
,
parents
do not always agree with their
children
's interests.
For example
, if a
child
wants to be a technician0 or hairdresser his or her folks don't allow them to do that, as to statistics those kinds of jobs are low paying.
However
,
parents
don't think about successful hairdressers who have multiple barbershops or techniques that work with brands like Lamborghini. Eventually, any job can lead
children
to succeed if their folks are not against it. In conclusion, I believe that
parents
should influence
to
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their
children
to become good people in the future and help them to find their place in our society.
Also
, If the
child
has an interest in something
parents
need to allow him or her to do that because that's could be the success that they searching for.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • nurture
  • influence
  • values
  • attitudes
  • supportive environment
  • fostering
  • education
  • learning
  • discipline
  • responsibility
  • social skills
  • emotional skills
  • communication
  • success
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