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how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.

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The given graph compares the ways of utilization of noxious garbage in the Republic of
Korea
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,
Sweden
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 and the UK.In general, there are five methods of
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 process. As data suggests, in
Korea
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 and
Sweden
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waste
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 is utilized by recycling,incineration and by digging it in.Looking into details, approximately half of garbage in
Sweden
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 is buried underground,while in the Korean Republic only a quarter of it.
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,
Korea
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 is a leader in recycling(69%), while only fourth part of overall deleterious
waste
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 in
Sweden
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 is reprocessed. The least popular in these two countries is destroying
waste
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 by fire: only 9 % In
Korea
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 and one-fifth share in
Sweden
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. Turning to Great Britain, the majority of its harmful
waste
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 is utilized in landfills(82 %),whereas only 2 % are incinerated. It is worth noting that The United Kingdom is
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 using two additional methods: dumping in the sea and chemical treatment ( 8% and 8 % respectively). Overall, there were five utilization methods mentioned, amongst which recycling was the most developed in
Korea
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, whereas in
Sweden
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 and Great Britain the majority of poisonous
waste
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 is buried underground.
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