Some people say that to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that in order to avoid illness and disease, higher authorities ought to focus more on

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the

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environmental

pollution

and housing issues. I agree with

this

notion. In the forthcoming

paragaraphs

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paragraphs

, I will discuss my point

of

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with relevant epitome. To commence with, there is no doubt that the major

reasons

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of

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spreading disease

is

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pollution

.

In other words

, due to industrial factories and vehicles, hazardous gases have

spreaded

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spread

all over which affects directly the health of the peoples. They might

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with

the

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harmful diseases

such

as Asthma and various respiratory diseases.

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,

a

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recent

forcast

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forecast

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that the air quality of Delhi is 385 which is no doubt considered very poor.

Moreover

, due to the increment in the number of cars on road not only

pollution

is increase

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but

also

it becomes

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serious life threat to

humans

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life.

Thus

, reducing

environment

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environmental

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pollution

should be the

first

priority of the government.

Besides

, it is undeniable that there is a huge gap between the demand and supply of houses nowadays which leads to

growth

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of slums in cities. To elaborate, due to less availability of

residence

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, individuals

forced

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to live in slums which are not

hygenic

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hygienic

, and

also

there are no sanitation facilities for drainage

system

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and garbage disposal.

Consequently

,

people

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health might affect.

Therefore

, if people have provided adequate housing facilities, the possibility of illness would be overcome. In conclusion, I believe that government should

concenrate

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concentrate

on

pollution

and housing concerns due to

widerspread

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gases and smoke which would become

severe

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problem for

humans

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health and

also

sufficient homes should

constructed

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.