More and more people today are moving from the countryside . Why is this happening? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development ?
In recent times, people are migrating from small towns to metropolitan cities for manifold reasons. Better job opportunities and availability of
facilities
are the significant objective
which is expanding rapidly. I believe Change the noun form
objectives
this
is the
positive development for Correct article usage
a
the
individuals and for Correct article usage
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the
nations which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, most Correct article usage
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of
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the
youngsters are more inclined towards urban Correct article usage
apply
areas
in order to have immense career growth. As small towns do not have different job possibilities as per their respective careers. Due to this
, they tend to withstand there with low wages. For instance
, in 2020, during the economic crisis in India where financial losses were high, people from rural areas
were migrating to cities in contemplation of earning better
income. Add an article
a better
Therefore
, by getting the
professional advancements in Correct article usage
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career
, one Correct pronoun usage
one career
choose
to move towards big cities to get Change the verb form
chooses
better
education.
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a better
Furthermore
, in countryside
, communities do not have proper public Add an article
the countryside
facilities
such
as hospitals, schools, transport and many more. Due to which
, parents Correct pronoun usage
this
are
migrated from small towns to urban Unnecessary verb
apply
areas
with a view to save child's future. To cite an example, many individuals are
moved to Norway as it has the highest medical Unnecessary verb
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facilities
and universities so that they can have access to best
healthcare Correct article usage
the best
solution
and superior schooling. Fix the agreement mistake
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Hence
, they are likely to perpetually
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be perpetually
settled
in different nations.
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mobility
of citizens from remote Correct article usage
the mobility
areas
to Add an article
the suburb
suburb
is an optimistic step providing Fix the agreement mistake
suburbs
the
plenty of career options for students. Substantially, Correct article usage
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this
phenomenon is a good step for old
generation to get appropriate healthcare Add an article
the old
facilities
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
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- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite