Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to to get a good job. On the other hand, others people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important . Discuss both sides and give your opinio

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by some
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to be the optimal way to obtain a decent
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some would argue that getting experience and
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skills
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, I believe getting a
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is the best way to find an optimal
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. On the one hand, many
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believe that having great communication skills is important to keep any business to make
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feel welcome.
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, businesses that
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good communication service will keep their customers happy and they might come again to have a service.
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among employees, so the
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to have a great
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increases.
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, in the United
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culture, it is essential to provide great service to customers because it
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that a word of mouth is powerful to keep any business.
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, I believe it is more important to have a
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to find a suitable
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because
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everybody likes to work around
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, it is preferable to finish a
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education
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because
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the subjects a person feels attracted to. More importantly,
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might lead these
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to
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find a great
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because they decided what
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nearly
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future.
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, it provides a wide range of opportunities for
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students who decided to obtain a
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level of
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, The United States grant the opportunity to become
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doctor if you have a medical
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approved in your country; sometimes
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see the
necesity
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necessity
to go abroad and having a
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will offer them
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continue working abroad. I strongly believe
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is a preferable way of finding a suitable
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because it
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and these professionals do not depend to live
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one country or place to find a suitable
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. To conclude,
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it is important to have great communication skills and experience to find a great
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, it is vital to obtain a
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level of
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to find a suitable
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in any part of the world because it offers more opportunities to
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in life.
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