Some people think that children under 18 yrs old should receive full time education. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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I am writing
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to confirm that Harwinder Singh Deol is my brother and I would like to invite him to
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me and my family here in Hamilton. From 1 March 2023 to 31 March 2023. Flight bookings will be confirmed as soon as his visa is approved. The purpose of his
visit
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is for holidays, to meet my family and at the same time experience the summer season here in New Zealand.
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year I took my family to
visit
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my brother in England for 6 weeks. Now I would like him to
come
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visit
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us. I will be supporting my brother, Harwinder Singh Deol during his entire stay in New Zealand. I will
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be providing accommodation during his stay here, either staying with me at my house or at hotels which may be used whilst visiting different tourist destinations. I have enclosed the following documents as proof that I can financially support him during his stay here. Copy of my passport Financial evidence (Bank statement, pay slips) Evidence of accommodation ownership. Please contact me directly if you need
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