Some people think that children under 18 yrs old should receive full time education. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

I am writing

this

to confirm that Harwinder Singh Deol is my brother and I would like to invite him to

visit

me and my family here in Hamilton. From 1 March 2023 to 31 March 2023. Flight bookings will be confirmed as soon as his visa is approved. The purpose of his

visit

is for holidays, to meet my family and at the same time experience the summer season here in New Zealand.

Last

year I took my family to

visit

my brother in England for 6 weeks. Now I would like him to

come

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visit

us. I will be supporting my brother, Harwinder Singh Deol during his entire stay in New Zealand. I will

also

be providing accommodation during his stay here, either staying with me at my house or at hotels which may be used whilst visiting different tourist destinations. I have enclosed the following documents as proof that I can financially support him during his stay here. Copy of my passport Financial evidence (Bank statement, pay slips) Evidence of accommodation ownership. Please contact me directly if you need

further

information.

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4.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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