People are less fit and active nowadays than in the past. What are the reasons for this? What measures can be taken to fix this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relavent examples from your own knowledge and experience

Being healthy is the priority of everyone in the community. And we all know the positive effect of exercise

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our

body

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.

This

is to prevent us from any kind of illnesses that cause by being not active and fit. And

this

is

also

one of the main

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why

obese

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population is increasing. And

also

there are some reasons why some

people

refuse to exercise regularly. We are going to discuss all of it in

this

essay.

First

of all,

people

starting to

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their perseverance to exercise

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a regular basis because of their work.

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, those who are working multiple

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in a day. They are leaving their

home

early and come

home

late at night. At the end of the day, they are exhausted and they would rather go to rest and sleep than

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ther

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their

the

time

on

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exercising. And even though they want to jog or walk for a while they are afraid to do it since pretty late and it will be dark outside. And if they will

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at the gym it is another

expenses

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for the.,

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this

scenario, many

people

are prone to illnesses.

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, due to

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schedule

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of

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humans

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they don't have time to prepare healthy food.

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nurses, they are usually very busy and tired at work. And no time to cook at

home

. They tend to buy food from fast foods before going

home

and coming

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work. even though they know the consequences

for

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this

, they don't have

choice

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. And apart from

this

, they keep on drinking sodas,energy

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and chocolates to keep them awake for their job. In my opinion, there are a lot of factors why

people

choose not to be healthy and

obese

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population are increasing nowadays. I think the government should

be involve

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with

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this

problem. They should provide everyone

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a

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free use of gyms with benefits if they

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specific pounds. And

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should consider

to lessen

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the release of business

permit

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for fast food chains.