Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Accepting a bitter
situation
is the best choice, some portion of people believe that. On the other side, it is argued that bad situations should
be improve
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. In my opinion, accepting a bad
situation
is the best option for
everyone
, because not every
condition
is in our
hand
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. So,
everyone
should accept every
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of their lives. It is argued that
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accepting a bad
situation
is the best option
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life. Be that an unpleasant work of daily life
of
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decrease
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of
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money. Not only that, a bitter
situation
can be anything which leaves a person’s life devastated. Simply, it can be
loosing
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someone’s something precious.
However
, no matter what the
situation
or
condition
is, we must brace it with full of positivity.
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vibe can change a bad
situation
into a better one. We never know what is
next
and what is actually waiting for us.
Thus
, accepting every sort of
condition
and
aspects
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of
lives
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will be wise for
everyone
as not every
situation
is in our
hand
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hands
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.
For instance
, it
hard
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to find
as
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an
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unpleasant
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job for
everyone
.
As a result
, we have to accept what we get.
On the contrary
, some portions of
the
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people think that a bad
situation
should
be improve
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be improved
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. We can not predict
before hand
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beforehand
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whether a
situation
is bad or good.
In addition
, we can not always try to improve our
situation
until or unless we identify the depth of the
condition
.
For example
, if someone is out of money or if someone
face
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any trouble gathering money, not mandatory that s/he can improve
this
situation
. We can not overcome some bad
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inspite
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in spite
of trying hard and soul. In conclusion, every
situation
tells a different story about different people. We can not always turn the switch on and change our destiny. Rather, we should accept the way everything is going.
This
is how we can minimize our own trouble.
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  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
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  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
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