Some people prefer to provide help and support directly to those in need. Others however prefer to give money to national and international charitable organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Doing
charity
by giving donations or in
kind
is always welcome.,
,
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some
people
argue about How we should do
charity
. their point of argument is that we should support the needy and poor in
kind
.Whereas some
people
argue that donating cash to a charitable organisation is the right way to do
charity
. let's discuss both views and
then
I will give my opinion on the topic.
Firstly
, The main purpose of
charity
is to help the needy and poor. So that they can be helped and their needs can be met.By doing philanthropy in
kind
we get to know the plight of needy and poor
people
.
People
will be understood how their actions impact needy
people
's lives. Providing help directly to needy
people
realises the graveness of problems faced by the poor .
For instance
in countries like India
people
always donate used winter clothes to poor
people
in the winter season. poor
people
get benefited from
this
gesture.
Secondly
, If some
people
are donating
money
to help a
charity
organisation that provides basic amenities to poor
people
is
also
considered great help. If
money
is getting donated
then
a large section of poor
people
gets benefitted at a single point in time.
Moreover
By raising
money
charity
organisations can reach more needy
people
. For ,instance In Countries like the USA , churches provide shelter to homeless
people
in the winter season for night stay.
This
shelter initiative is funded by donors who gives a large sum of
money
to philanthropy organisation affiliated with churches. In conclusion, Doing
charity
is great
to
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work and by providing monetary support
Charity
organisations can reach more
people
in need . Whereas
charity
in
kind
demands the time of the individual. So
people
cannot devote time to philanthropy activities because of their professional commitments. So I am of opinion that
people
do
charity
by doing monetary contributions to national and international
charity
organisations,
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