Some people prefer to provide help and support directly to those in need. Others however prefer to give money to national and international charitable organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Doing
charity
by giving donations or in kind
is always welcome.,,
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However
some Add the comma(s)
,However
people
argue about How we should do charity
. their point of argument is that we should support the needy and poor in kind
.Whereas some people
argue that donating cash to a charitable organisation is the right way to do charity
. let's discuss both views and then
I will give my opinion on the topic.
Firstly
, The main purpose of charity
is to help the needy and poor. So that they can be helped and their needs can be met.By doing philanthropy in kind
we get to know the plight of needy and poor people
. People
will be understood how their actions impact needy people
's lives. Providing help directly to needy people
realises the graveness of problems faced by the poor . For instance
in countries like India people
always donate used winter clothes to poor people
in the winter season. poor people
get benefited from this
gesture.
Secondly
, If some people
are donating money
to help a charity
organisation that provides basic amenities to poor people
is also
considered great help. If money
is getting donated then
a large section of poor people
gets benefitted at a single point in time. Moreover
By raising money
charity
organisations can reach more needy people
. For ,instance In Countries like the USA , churches provide shelter to homeless people
in the winter season for night stay. This
shelter initiative is funded by donors who gives a large sum of money
to philanthropy organisation affiliated with churches.
In conclusion, Doing charity
is great to
work and by providing monetary support Fix the infinitive
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Charity
organisations can reach more people
in need . Whereas charity
in kind
demands the time of the individual. So people
cannot devote time to philanthropy activities because of their professional commitments. So I am of opinion that people
do charity
by doing monetary contributions to national and international charity
organisations,Submitted by yash334 on
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