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There are many people who go to live in different countries. To what extent should people be allowed to move freely between countries and live where they choose? What are the benefits and drawbacks of this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#people #countries #move
In the modern ,scenario
people
 tend to migrate to another
country
 by leaving their motherland.
However
, if someone wishes to live in a different
country
 to gain a quality of
life
 there will be a procedure for that. Without considering their academic qualifications, language skills and other abilities how any
country
 does not allow
people
 to immigrate or get apply for permanent residency
.
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This
 essay will discuss both pros and cons of the passion to live in a different
country
. On one hand, migration will help to achieve
life
 goals and targets within a limited time rather than living in the same
country
.
Further
 someone living in
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developing
country
such
 as most Asian and African
countries
. Many professionals achieve their
life
 goals, financial status, and physical achievements in the long term period. As an example government officers including doctors, engineers and etc more likely to gain their targets to improve the quality of
life
 in the middle age of 40-50 years as well as with bank debts.
However
, if they migrated to a developed
country
 with a rising economy
this
 will be changed. They definitely can improve their living status in a short time period. ,
Furthermore
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 there are drawbacks as well.
On the other hand
,
this
 will impact critically on to the
country
people
 who live earlier. Brain drain situations could be transformed
countries
 into the downfall of the economy, technology, education, safety and health.
For instance
countries
 with political corruption including Sri Lanka, Lebanon is facing that kind of situation. Many
people
 try to go to foreign
countries
 with an economic crisis which leads to a brain drain. Central bank records that 0.25 million
people
 migrated
last
 year. ,
,
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Furthermore
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the current situation will cause the problems in near future with a negative effect on the
country
. In conclusion, there are positive effects
such
 as increments of personal status,
however
,could happen negative effects
such
 as brain-drain as can impact everything in the
country
.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

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  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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