There are many people who go to live in different countries. To what extent should people be allowed to move freely between countries and live where they choose? What are the benefits and drawbacks of this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In the modern ,scenario
people
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tend to migrate to another
country
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by leaving their motherland.
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, if someone wishes to live in a different
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to gain a quality of
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there will be a procedure for that. Without considering their academic qualifications, language skills and other abilities how any
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does not allow
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to immigrate or get apply for permanent residency
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essay will discuss both pros and cons of the passion to live in a different
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. On one hand, migration will help to achieve
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goals and targets within a limited time rather than living in the same
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someone living in
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developing
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as most Asian and African
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. Many professionals achieve their
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goals, financial status, and physical achievements in the long term period. As an example government officers including doctors, engineers and etc more likely to gain their targets to improve the quality of
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in the middle age of 40-50 years as well as with bank debts.
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, if they migrated to a developed
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with a rising economy
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will be changed. They definitely can improve their living status in a short time period. ,
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there are drawbacks as well.
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will impact critically on to the
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people
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who live earlier. Brain drain situations could be transformed
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into the downfall of the economy, technology, education, safety and health.
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countries
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with political corruption including Sri Lanka, Lebanon is facing that kind of situation. Many
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try to go to foreign
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with an economic crisis which leads to a brain drain. Central bank records that 0.25 million
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migrated
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year. ,
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the current situation will cause the problems in near future with a negative effect on the
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. In conclusion, there are positive effects
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as increments of personal status,
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,could happen negative effects
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as brain-drain as can impact everything in the
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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