There is an increasing population on the planet, and people are running out of water, food, and fuel. To what consequences may overpopulation lead? In your opinion, what measures can be taken to fight overpopulation?

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Overpopulation
is one of the most common problems in each country. We all know
this
problem is preventable with the help of the
government
. In
this
,essay we will discuss the possible effect of
overpopulation
worldwide and at the same ,time we will come up with a solution.
Firstly
, if the country is
overpopulation
this
can lead to an increasing poverty rate.
For instance
, if one family consists of 5 children the parents will strive to provide for their family. But some parents have low incomes and cannot even send their kids to school.
This
will be a
government
problem to help
this
family send their kids to school and the budget for education will be increased due to
this
reason. And since they are low-income families, they are not required to pay taxes. In the ,end the
government
will need to increase the taxes of other families to compensate those who are below the minimum rate.
On the other hand
,
Government
should be part of the solution
this
is to implement family planning in each family. For ,example those who are on minimum wage must limit their offspring. And if they are planning to expand their family they must show the
Government
that they can send their kids to school and provide a better life for them. And
also
government
should provide them free supply of contraceptives for those who are willing to have fewer children. In my opinion,
overpopulation
can be controlled if the
government
make sure that everyone is responsible for their own families.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overpopulation
  • depletion
  • arable land
  • fossil fuels
  • deforestation
  • biodiversity
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • unemployment
  • healthcare systems
  • overcrowding
  • cost of living
  • family planning
  • sustainable
  • renewable energy
  • agricultural yields
  • conservation
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