Many people use distance-leanring programmes (study material post, TV, internet, etc) to study at home, but some people think that it can not bring the same benefit of attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Being a student is one of the major parts of one's life. Some parents prefer enrolling their children at
home
school
, while other says
it is much better to enrol their Change the verb form
say
kids
in actual schools like university or college. I agree that the benefits that a person can learn from attending physical school
are not the same as home
school
.
Firstly
, by attending a physical school
kids
will not only learn academically but at the same time have the opportunity to improve their socialization skills. For instance
, if the kids
were able to meet other people with different backgrounds they can learn more about the other type of living and cultures. And at the same time, they can gain more self-confidence with the help of everyday exposure to a group of people while they are inside the campus.
Secondly
, no doubt that most of the happiest memories of a person are from their school
days. During this
part of their life, they were able to create their own peer groups. For example
, this
is the part where a person will meet their best friend with whom they share problems and experiences in life. Unlike those who are home
,Change preposition
at home
school
they are more prone to depression because they feel alone without the chance to meet other people.
In summary, it is more beneficial if parents let their Correct word choice
and school
kids
attend a physical school
such
as a university or college rather than home
Correct article usage
a home
school
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite