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The planets population is reaching unsustainable levels and people are facing shortage of respurces like water and food. To what consequences may over population lead? In your opinion what measures can be taken to fight over population

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In recent decades, it is a fact that the growth of the
population
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 which could lead to encounter a shortage of resources in the end has been significantly increasing over the world. The unexpected consequences of the uncatchable
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 as natural disasters or infectious diseases are prevailing and worrying aspects of all individuals' lives. In
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 essay, I would like to explain the results and measures of a growing
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 of
people
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 of all, the growth of the
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 has been causing undoubtedly a shortage of natural resources
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 as water or food.
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, there are severely challenging situations regardless of developed developing countries since the
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 of resources currently having on
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 planet is not enough to reach all nations' populations.
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,
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 situation could possibly lead to a
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 of human
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 deaths by drought or infections as they are struggling with a lack of accommodations and
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 compact
population
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 density. As one of the fundamental measures, we could consider utilizing recyclable water systems which are currently applied in poor countries.
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, wealthy countries
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 as the USA and South Korea have been adapting ocean filtering programs on
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 nations to enable
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 to get drinkable water.
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, developing a meal tablet which can comparatively reduce the
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 of
people
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 facing the shortage of food over the world will allow
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 to overcome starvation.
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, these measures should be beneficial to manage overpopulation. In conclusion, it cannot be denied that most nations across the globe should cooperate for enhancing scientific advancements to encounter the unanticipated increasing
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unsustainable levels
  • shortage of resources
  • strain
  • exponential growth
  • critical shortages
  • environmental pollution
  • climate change
  • wildlife habitats
  • economic challenges
  • unemployment rates
  • worsened poverty
  • overcrowding
  • communicable diseases
  • social unrest
  • food security
  • urban sprawl
  • family planning
  • sustainable agricultural practices
  • renewable energy
  • infant mortality rates
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