These days, more people are going to university than in the past. They start work later in life and with higher qualifications. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays education is very important and essential so for better work choices and improves our life we need higher education
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opinion
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is a positive development and say self-development
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means you invest yourself in future we have many reasons for my view
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, everyday present limited application for high-level work and compete more than before when you apply for some job, a lot of people apply for that time
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the same time and that company accept a person that has a higher qualification ,
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science updates frequently and we should upgrade ourselves that find the best job wrap up we need to graduate from university or college that we have different positions for working
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