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Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students. Discuss these views. Which view do you agree with? Explain why

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In our modern time,
education
 is the most important, I totally agree that all people should obtain the opportunity to access
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education
 but
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students
 who are not good at studies are not
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join
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 the university There are many reasons why higher
education
 should be available for all admission.
Firstly
, the most important thing is that
bad
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students
 do not mean they can not
study
 well.
Furthermore
, if they allow only good
pupils
 that are not equal to other people who want to join the university
such
 as the
students
 who
study
 well but used to have bad grades when they were studying at high school and if they are not allowed to attend an academy that can lead to lack of qualified personnel.
Secondly
, not only good
students
 can follow the curriculum of higher-level
education
 but
also
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. In fact,
students
 who have determination are
also
 able to make it at a slower pace.
For example
,
pupils
 who have a strong passion to
study
 to follow their dream can try to
study
 hard until they gain a good result.
On the other hand
, good
students
 can improve their academic results easier.
First
 of all, good
pupils
 are able to learn well and it is easy for teachers to teach them.
Moreover
,After that, teens can take part in major field proficiency and teachers allow
students
 to work on
study
 in detail.
Also
, it has high competition in their class but it will bring good results in the future as
students
 who are good at sciences will improve technology better.
As a result
, intelligent
pupils
 will help to create good outcomes.
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