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Why I am spending a lot of money on many things? I believe
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Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

is because you are not sleeping on time.
Best
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The best

The noun phrase Best solution seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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solution to the overspending is to send money to India. How can
i
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I

The pronoun I should always be capitalized.

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achive
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achieve

If you don’t want achive to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

so many things in so little time
.
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?

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I need someone to motivate me and give me hope. Do you think that someone will show up and motivate you
.
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?

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No Zeshan you have to motivate yourself. If I
dont
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don't

If you don’t want dont to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

change my daily life,
you
Correct pronoun usage
I

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will not improve in any facet of
your
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my

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life. You have to spend most
your
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of your

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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life without
nisa
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Nisa

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and
mom
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Mom

The word mom should be capitalized in this context.

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. What shall I do now
.
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?

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Why I am always tired
.
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?

The punctuation mark may be incorrect here. Consider changing it.

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Why my back ache is not getting cured? Why my back is
acheing
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aching

If you don’t want acheing to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

all the time? How are you feeling after waking up
.
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?

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My back is not aching but
i
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I

The pronoun I should always be capitalized.

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can feel that it is weak. My nose is somewhat blocked What are you going to do today I am going to wash
Correct article usage
the remaing

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remaing
Correct your spelling
remaining

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clothes I will get my clothes pressed I will try my best to pray in the mosque. With the help of notifications Find a smart
solutioin
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solution

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for studying I am going to wash
washbasin
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the washbasin

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. Keep the clothes ready for tomorrow

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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