Development in technology has brought various environmental problems. Some believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

By
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advance
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the advance
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of
technology
which has resulted in many environmental issues, there
has
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have
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bern
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been
debates about whether it can reduce adverse effects on
environment
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the environment
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or not. It will be discussed on both sides as follows: I side with those who believe that
technology
alleviate
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environmental
problems
.
First
of all, the emergence of online platforms can arise the awareness of people about
problems
on
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in
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surroundings. By watching some videos on the internet they become informed of
such
threats as green gasses and water contamination.
Hence
, they try to avoid them or find solutions to tackle these
problems
.
Secondly
, developed
technology
brings opportunities for nations to invest
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renewable energy forms like solar, wind or water power to cope with current
problems
.
Conversely
, the people who are of the opinion that life without
technology
is a better way to come up with environmental matters believe that the simpler
the
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life is the
less
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problems
there are.
This
is to say that modern
technology
facilitate
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facilitates
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many human activities that
guarantees
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sustainable and drastic impacts on our environment. To illustrate,
travelers
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travellers
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have access to information and
facility
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the facility
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of going to untouched areas and
expand
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expanding
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the
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urbanization which leads to
production
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the production
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of emissions and exhaust fumes from cars and factories.
However
, I hold the view that
such
negative outcomes are overshadowed by mentioned positive points. To sum up, in a
technology
-focused world which facilitates
flow
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the flow
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and dissemination of information,
protection
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the protection
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of
environment
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the environment
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and finding new alternatives to fossil fuels is a good
solution
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solutions
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to solve environmental
problems
.
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