Development in technology has brought various environmental problems. Some believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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advance

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the advance

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of

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which has resulted in many environmental issues, there

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bern

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been

debates about whether it can reduce adverse effects on

environment

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the environment

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or not. It will be discussed on both sides as follows: I side with those who believe that

technology

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alleviate

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environmental

problems

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of all, the emergence of online platforms can arise the awareness of people about

problems

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on

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surroundings. By watching some videos on the internet they become informed of

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threats as green gasses and water contamination.

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, they try to avoid them or find solutions to tackle these

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.

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, developed

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brings opportunities for nations to invest

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renewable energy forms like solar, wind or water power to cope with current

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, the people who are of the opinion that life without

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is a better way to come up with environmental matters believe that the simpler

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life is the

less

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problems

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there are.

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is to say that modern

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facilitate

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many human activities that

guarantees

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sustainable and drastic impacts on our environment. To illustrate,

travelers

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travellers

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have access to information and

facility

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the facility

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of going to untouched areas and

expand

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expanding

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the

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urbanization which leads to

production

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the production

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of emissions and exhaust fumes from cars and factories.

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, I hold the view that

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negative outcomes are overshadowed by mentioned positive points. To sum up, in a

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-focused world which facilitates

flow

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the flow

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and dissemination of information,

protection

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the protection

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of

environment

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the environment

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and finding new alternatives to fossil fuels is a good

solution

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solutions

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to solve environmental

problems

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