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some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. To what extant do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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Most
people
 say that more waste from homes should be recycled. These
people
 state that the only solution for
this
 problem is for the government to create an article in the constitution to make it a legal requirement. In my opinion, I am with
this
 notion. In 2010, governments all around the world started to spread awareness of recycling because they want to create a healthy environment or what they call it "green environment". So, after the
people
 understood the concept, most of them started to care about recycling each product they purchase,
such
 as plastic bags or bottles, glass, paper, or any kind of metal.
Moreover
, in 2012, developed countries
such
 as the UK, the USA, and European countries have created a vending machine that when you put any kind of material it will recycle it, and it will give you an award for each item that you put inside the machine, and that has improved the concept of recycling.
Furthermore
, in the
last
 couple of years, some homes are not recycling their waste, and that will affect the environment in a negative way,
such
 as an increase in the amount of animals death and
this
 would lead to their extinction, escalating the percentage of climate change and more. In conclusion, the idea of the governments for spreading the awareness of recycling has changed the mindset of
people
 and
also
it
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deescalated the amount of littering around the world; in my opinion, if the government has made it legal,
this
 will going to increase the amount of recycling, and
also
 it will force
people
 to keep recycling their waist so they can teach the reckless
people
 to how they clean their waste and keep the country eco-friendly.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Recycling initiatives
  • Waste management
  • Mandatory regulations
  • Compliance and enforcement
  • Recyclable materials
  • Circular economy
  • Landfill diversion
  • Conservation
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Sanitation services
  • Public policy
  • Behavioral change
  • Eco-consciousness
  • Resource recovery
  • Single-stream recycling
  • Waste hierarchy
  • Economic incentives
  • Ecological footprint
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