The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly

money

is the deciding factor in the selection of a

job

. Many

people

believe high income allows them to provide financial security for themselves and their families. Whether or not

money

is a significant factor in choosing a

job

, considering each person's interest. In

this

essay

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I will give my opinion and describe why

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I

agree

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whit

this

statement.

To begin

whit the importance of

money

in society is unavoidable. So most

of

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people

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after careers with high incomes. ,Witch it’s a wise decision to make. A career with high salaries, probably won’t need

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amount

time

of work and

also

you may provide yourself less difficult life.

However

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each career has its own difficulty and even in choosing the following

job

people

should consider their interests as well.

Nevertheless

making

money

feels good and elevates

people

's motivations, but it might make you exhausted after a while. So for making an even wiser decision it’s better to choose a high-income

job

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to your interest.

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unlike only a few numbers of

people

who choose to select a

job

without thinking about financial problems in the future and its consequences, most

of

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people

choose to select their

job

professionally and spend

time

enjoying their interest as a hobby at the same

time

.

For example

, choosing a

job

as a surgeon and following painting skills in

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time

.

However

the following statement doesn’t mean painters can’t make

money

as surgeons,

this

is just a personal theory.

On the other hand

, having a high income can’t be the only factor

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choosing a career. There are more important factors to consider. There are always easier choices for having markable incomes, which

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might be illegal or against

humanity

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rights.

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we should put these moral factors

first

and think if the selected

job

is useful for society or if it brings any benefit to humanity,

also

defining the advantages and disadvantages of the selected

job

. To conclude, in my view, having a noticeable income should be considered in total because somehow our entire life depends on it, due to the moral side of it and our interests, it’s better to consider all before making a decision.