Some people claim that what people eat in many Western countries is unhealthy and that their diet is getting worse .Critics say that these countries should change their diet. What are your opinion on this?

In the modern era , there are so many things to eat as well as enjoy to their

taste

. Few

masses

think that those folk living in the overseas

nation

do not have a proper

diet

in their daily routines, whereas

others

are against

this

notion . I totally agree with the latter view and will discuss it in the upcoming paragraphs .

To begin

with,

that is

why individuals think the

diet

of foreign

people

is not well and good .

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and foremost reason is

masses

believe the their own

nation

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diet

is totally effective for everyone and sometimes they do not have the

taste

of another

country

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country's

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food

as well as if they try abroad

food

then

may they dislike the

taste

because nobody says that other

nation

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food

is better in compersion their own

country

.

Furthermore

, sometimes folks do not have enough knowledge about the culture

food

of

others

and they just judge the

food

by its photos as well as

then

they never like to

taste

food

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the food

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of other

nation

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nations

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as compared to their

country

.

For example

, in the year , 2010 a survey conducted by UNO which was indicating about the percentage of

food

judging

people

from their photos , which was 70 % .

On the other hand

, everyone has their cultural eating

habits

if anybody says wrong about any other

nation

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food

habits

then

it will be a reason for fighting and maybe the

nation

start wars against

others

because nobody wants to insult their cultural

habits

and lifestyle . In my opinion , it's not a good way to show low down other

country

food

because if they do not say anything about

others

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nation

lifestyle

then

who are those

masses

can talk about their

food

habits

.

Moreover

, if anybody does not have proper knowledge about other

nation

's

diet

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diets

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then

I think it must be searched by

masses

first

about their

diet

then

collect the results about

diet

.

For instance

,

people

say if the cultural values are the same

then

how individuals are located by their different thinks of

others

and learn new things from other parts of the world . In conclusion, if

masses

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try to

taste

other

nation

food

then

it is a better way to think about

food

habits

and they must understand the reason why other

nation

people

love their

food

.