You are taking a holiday in a place recommended by your local travel agent, you have had a wonderful time. You have promised to write to him and let him know what you think of his suggestion. Write a letter to your travel agent as promised, and let him know what you have been doing and what you are going to do before the end of the journey.

Dear Mr Smith, As promised, I'm writing to you to give my feedback on the experience I had so far in Spain.
First
, I'd like to thank you for
this
suggestion. I really enjoyed each day that I spent here. On the
first
day, just after we arrived, we went to a local restaurant, serving a 3-course dinner. What amazing food it has been! The
next
few days we spent on the beach, taking the surf course. All instructors were friendly and spoke in English perfectly.
Moreover
, they gave me a few helpful tips. I'll definitely recommend
this
school to my friends. I still have three days left. They will be busy, but I'm very much looking forward to them. Not only I'll continue with the surf course, but I have
also
signed up for a tour
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a nearby village and a wine tasting. Thank you again for
this
brilliant recommendation. I'll definitely come back to you when I plan my
next
trip. Yours faithfully, Vladimir Ryabchikov
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