Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on family celebrations. While others think it is a waste of money. Discuss both views.

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The table illustrates the consumption of different essential foods namely
rice
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, wheat and
maize
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by an average person on a daily basis in four countries namely Cambodia,
Poland
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, Egypt and Mexico. After analysing the data, we can clearly see that the paddy
intake
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is most popular among the people of Cambodia with 1445 calories and it is least liked by the
Poland
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population with only 19 calories
intake
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. Egyptians consume both
rice
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and
maize
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in nearly equal quantities with 501 and 578 calories respectively. It is surprising to note that citizens of
Poland
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have zero intakes of
maize
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while Mexican people have the highest
intake
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of
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crop. Wheat is more liked by Egyptians in comparison with
rice
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and
maize
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as the calorie
intake
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is 1095 much higher than their
rice
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and
maize
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consumption. Overall, we can see that Cambodians eat the lowest amount of wheat, while
Poland
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people have the least calorie
intake
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of
Rice
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in comparison with other regions.
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, Mexicans consume a good quantity of
rice
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in comparison with
Poland
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and they are
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the largest consumers of
maize
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crops.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cherish
  • nurture
  • strengthen
  • bond
  • create memories
  • enjoyment
  • sense of belonging
  • reconnect
  • unite
  • traditions
  • create traditions
  • financial burden
  • priorities
  • moderation
  • budget
  • frugal
  • extravagant
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