You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the Head of Department to change your course. In your letter, explain: what course you are doing now why you are not satisfied with that course what course you would like to change to Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I am from the technical department where I am pursuing
the
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course
of
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System Testing. I opted for the
course
in April. In my
course
, I am taught about hardware devices and troubleshooting. Honestly, I am not satisfied with the
course
because of two reasons.
Firstly
, it is totally different from what was mentioned in the brochure of the College.
Secondly
, the
course
does not interest me as it is a
basic level
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course
.
Hence
it is difficult for me to concentrate in the class as I have already studied and implemented it in my previous job. Henceforth, I request you
to
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change my
course
to Advance System Testing before the exams. I have read all the details about the
course
and have met the students who have taken that
course
.
This
course
interests me more than my current
course
.
Also
,
this
course
will benefit me professionally. I would appreciate your help. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Shweta
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Consider providing more detail on why the Advanced System Testing course interests you.
coherence cohesion
The letter could benefit from more structured paragraphs to improve readability.
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The letter maintains a polite and formal tone throughout, which is appropriate for addressing a Head of Department.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph clearly addresses a specific aspect of the prompt, contributing to a logical flow.

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