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Year
 before
refurbishment
Year
 after
refurbishment
 The
pie
 graph illustrates the
numbers
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number
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 of guests to Ashdown
Museum
 during the
year
 before and the
year
 after it was renovated. The charts
depicts
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depict
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 the satisfaction of their visit. Overall, there is an increase total number of
visitors
 after the
year
 of Ashdown
museum
refurbishment
 which
recorded
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is recorded
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 in the graph.
Similarly
, it describes the highest rank of satisfaction proportion
compare
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compared
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 to the
year
 before it was not developed. In the previous
year
 wherein
museum
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the museum
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 was not yet reconstructed, it depicts less than 10 between the total of its changes after
refurbishment
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a refurbishment
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 which accounts
40
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for 40
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 of the
pie
 size who are very satisfied
visitors
.
Subsequently
, dissatisfied guests held the highest rank proportion of
a
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the
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pie
 which is 40 before reconstruction
in contrast
 to the result after the
museum
refurbishment
 which became less than half of the
pie
. With regard to very
disatissfied
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dissatisfied
satisfied
visitors
, in the previous
year
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,year
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it
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they
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 accounted
10
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for 10
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 of the
pie
 proportion and it turns out half
od
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of
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 it after the
year
 of reconstruction.
Furthermore
, there is
a
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apply
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zero changes in
number
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a number
the number
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 of
visitors
 during the same two periods.
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