Universities should enrol equal members of male and female students in all subjects. Do you agree or disagree?
The number of students
register
for each Wrong verb form
registered
course
should be the same for girls and for boys. Personally, I believe that in this
moderns days, gender
should not be relevant for
a University's inscription. because everyone should have equal rights and possibilities.
I agree that in each Change preposition
to
course
of study
the places for women and for men are the same, even if we are talking about a Add a comma
,study
course
that is
traditionally for boys. From my experience, I can say that not everywhere this
role works. In fact, when I studied in a nautical school the boarding school had more bedrooms for men than for women. This
example shows that the attention at
Change preposition
to
gender
was wrong because tend to prefer boys' education.
On the other hand
, choosing to prefer a student only for gender
quotas is not a real solution. In a case like that, the best thing is to provide an equal number of beds for each gender
and accept a student only for his or her capability. Hence
, a course
should present more males o females only because each of them deserves to study there. In this
way, each member of society will be a real part of it, not begin
exclude only for his or her nature, studying what he or she wants to create a good working career.
in conclusion, Add the particle
tobegin
although
projects to increase places for women in studies predominantly male or vice versa, is a good idea gender
should not ever again become a determinant requirement. In my opinion, only professional knowledge can have an effect on admission.Submitted by miryam.i.dedea on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite