Doctors recommend that older people should excersice regularly.However many of them do not exercise enough. What are the causes? What can be done to encourage them to exercise?

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Dear Sir/ Madam, Seizing the opportunity and spurred by an ambition to make a challenging career in your reputed organization, I take

this

opportunity to introduce myself as an aspirant for the post of

Landscape

Architect. Sir, I am a

Landscape

Architect with 06 years of work experience in

Landscape

Architecture, designing, research, on-site execution, and site coordination. Currently, I am working as a

Landscape

Consultant for Design & Planning cell, Delhi Jal Board, New Delhi. Not only I had been working in the capacity of

Landscape

Architect Archohm, Noida earlier but

also

had done an internship with Akshay Kaul & Associates.

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, My previous work experience has familiarized me with many of the responsibilities and challenges related to the position. Working with Akshay Kaul & Associates give me a broader perspective to see

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plan

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beyond the recreational purpose. It basically helps to lead my perspective towards eco-sensitive design. In Archohm I basically worked more on commercial and institutional types of projects whereas in djb the projects were related to

restoration

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and recreation of waterbodies and drains.

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detailed resume & an overview of my work in

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is enclosed in my application. Given a chance to serve, I assure you that I shall do my best to prove myself an asset to your esteemed organization. Thank you for your time and consideration. Warm Regards, Madhu Rana

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Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

228 words

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Doctors recommend that older people should excersice regularly.However many of them do not exercise enough. What are the causes? What can be done to encourage them to exercise?

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