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Rhinomaxillary
mucormycosis
 located in the periodontal tissue (gingival and alveolar bone) are rare. Most often, the clinical presentation is that of a non-healing extraction socket. Initial signs are non-specific necrotic ulcer, which later turns into a characteristic black necrotic lesion. A literature search was performed in PubMed/Medline database using the terms “periodontal
mucormycosis
”, “rhinomaxillary
mucormycosis
” and “gingival
mucormycosis
”. A total of 35 research papers have been retrieved. Only
case
 reports in which
cases
 showed a periodontal or gingival presentation of
mucormycosis
 in the maxillary or mandibular arch were considered. A total of eleven
case
 reports were included in the manuscript, whose main characteristics have been summarized in table 2. None of these reported
cases
 had a history of
Covid-19
.
Nagalli
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Cagalli
 et. al. in 2021 published a systematic
review
 on “
Mucormycosis
 in
Covid-19
” [6]. None of the
cases
 in their
review
 showed any gingival or periodontal clinical findings. Roden MM et al. 2005 conducted a
review
 of 929
cases
 of zygomycosis[8]. The
review
 showed that the fungal infection mainly occurred in the mean age group of 38.8 years with a higher prevalence seen in the males (65%) compared to females. Diabetes mellitus was the most common underlying condition seen in most
of
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patients
. 154
patients
 presented with a malignant neoplasm, among which 147 (95%) were having haematological malignancies.
However
, Bonifaz A et al 2020 in their literature
review
 reported 11
cases
 of periodontal
mucormycosis
. The common risk factor in 10 of the
patients
 was haematological malignancies and one was reported with diabetes[9]. In the present paper, the
first
case
 had transient hyperglycemia due to steroids intake for
covid-19
 treatment, the
second
case
 had controlled diabetes but had taken steroids for
covid-19
 treatment, which again lead to transient hyperglycemia during the treatment and the
third
 patient had uncontrolled diabetes and was not taking any medications for the same. The common risk factor in all three
patients
 was hyperglycemia during
Covid-19
 infection. All three
cases
 showed
mucormycosis
 presentation within two months of
Covid-19
 recovery.
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