youth violence is a result of violene in the media, do you agree or disagree

Media
is the most important part of
people
's lives in
this
digital era. Any kind of human activity needs
media
to be improved and get better quality.
For instance
, getting work and reaching higher
education
information
is given by the
media
. Unfortunately, it has a bad impact in terms of action movies if its viewer, the
youth
, fights by watching an action series. In
this
case, I do not completely agree that
youth
violence
has resulted from the
media
overall.
Firstly
, the
media
contributed to giving some
information
about
job
vacancies, especially in the digital era.
For instance
, a developing country like Indonesia which has a big population needs the
media
to share
information
like
job
opportunities to decrease the number of poverty.
Moreover
, it can be done by using social
media
platforms in order to give
this
chance to all ages.
Nevertheless
, There are not all
people
can access the internet or social
media
. Fortunately, elderlies who still need a
job
can get it from television.
Secondly
, reaching higher
education
is another one of the main reasons why
media
gives a good impact on society.
For example
,
youth
generations need a lot of
information
to get a better
education
,
thus
they can get a great
job
. Nowadays, young
people
use
media
to find out about abroad scholarships more on social
media
.
Furthermore
, some of them get a
job
in another country.
This
change happens because they read the
media
platform so that they are not lack
information
. The
last
, spoken about
youth
violence
does not mean the bad side of
media
at all, but it is accumulated from everything in
people
's life, even though there is a serial, action movie, which can be a reason for
violence
.
For instance
, a person who ever got bad traits from her family member, so that she does the same case to others. From
this
case, it can be seen that
people
can do the bad trait because of their environment and it is not a
media
.
Thus
,
media
is not a majority factor in why
youth
violence
can happen. In conclusion,
Media
is not a main factor in
violence
in terms of young
people
, as the
media
can give some positive sides to the
youth
generation's life like getting a
job
and reaching higher
education
.
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