Most countries allow 18year old to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow driving at that age.Others think that the age to start driving should be at least 25 years.Discuss both views.

Most countries accept that young adults

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driving a

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some would argue that there is no problem to allow them to

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, I believe that the right

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to

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driving is 25 years old

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because

they are more mature to make choices while driving, and they need to have a job.

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one hand, 18 years old

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have no experience to

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and they might easily get into a

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accident.

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, these young adults are less

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conscious

to think about the consequences of having an accident, so some of them tend to

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.

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, many of them really do not need a

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because they still attending school, so the necessity of having a

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is not justified.

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, In The United States, adolescents who

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to

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will need to have a tutor who signed for

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then

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, and every time the

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is used, a tutor must be in the

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.

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, I believe allowing

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young

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to have a

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is a waste of time and money because they still attending school and the

necesity

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necessity

of driving is not a vital thing to do.

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25 years old to allow them to

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,

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is

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thing to do because at

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a person has finished school and

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found a job.

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, at

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age

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,

people

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seem to be more mature and take wise

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decisions

when driving. More importantly, most of them need to perform daily activities like parenting or getting done a job.

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, many studies in The UK have proved that

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accident

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are highly related

with

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to

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young

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population, so

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proved that the

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to

star

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driving a

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it

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is crucial. I believe

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is a preferable way of conducting our society because we need to raise awareness of being

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responsible

citizens. To conclude,

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it is tempting to start driving a

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at

early

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,

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is not always the most preferable way of thinking because we need to be aware of what we are doing by the time we

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a

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, and studies have proved that

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people'

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people

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age

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it is vital.