Most countries allow 18year old to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow driving at that age.Others think that the age to start driving should be at least 25 years.Discuss both views.
Most countries accept that young adults
starting
driving a Wrong verb form
start
car
. Although
some would argue that there is no problem to allow them to drive
, I believe that the right age
to star
driving is 25 years old Correct your spelling
start
becuase
they are more mature to make choices while driving, and they need to have a job.
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because
the
one hand, 18 years old Change preposition
On the
people
have no experience to drive
and they might easily get into a car
accident. Firstly
, these young adults are less concious
to think about the consequences of having an accident, so some of them tend to Correct your spelling
conscious
overspeed
. Change the capitalization
Overspeed
overspend
Moreover
, many of them really do not need a car
because they still attending school, so the necessity of having a car
is not justified. For instance
, In The United States, adolescents who are allow
to Change the verb form
are allowed
drive
will need to have a tutor who signed for then
, and every time the Correct your spelling
them
car
is used, a tutor must be in the car
. However
, I believe allowing yound
Correct your spelling
young
people
to have a car
is a waste of time and money because they still attending school and the necesity
of driving is not a vital thing to do.
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necessity
On the other hand
, waiting that people
turn
25 years old to allow them to Fix the infinitive
to turn
drive
, it
is Correct pronoun usage
apply
smart
thing to do because at Add an article
the smart
a smart
this
age
a person has finished school and have
found a job. Correct subject-verb agreement
has
Also
, at this
age
, people
seem to be more mature and take wise decisitions
when driving. More importantly, most of them need to perform daily activities like parenting or getting done a job. Correct your spelling
decisions
For instance
, many studies in The UK have proved that car
accident
are highly related Fix the agreement mistake
accidents
with
Change preposition
to
young
population, so Add an article
a young
this
proved that the age
to star
driving a Correct your spelling
start
car
it
is crucial. I believe Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
is a preferable way of conducting our society because we need to raise awareness of being responsable
citizens.
To conclude, Correct your spelling
responsible
although
it is tempting to start driving a car
at early
Add an article
an early
age
, this
is not always the most preferable way of thinking because we need to be aware of what we are doing by the time we drive
a car
, and studies have proved that people'
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people
age
it is vital.Submitted by cuevas14dic on
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