It's generally believed that success in fields such as art and sport can only be achieved if a person has natural talent. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or artist. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

In
this
contemporary world, people achieve
success
any way they want. Many people hold the view that
success
in art and sport can be achieved through an individual's inborn
talents
whereas the opponents believe that by teaching their
talents
children
can be a sportsman or
sportswomen
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and an artist.
However
, I believe that with the correct guidance and subject materials,
children
can achieve
success
. The following essay will
further
elaborate on above both views with examples. Commencing, today we see many of the
children
achieving their targets to become world-recognized artists or
sports
persons through their
talents
.
Besides
, it is told by a plethora of people that when a child becomes successful he or she has inborn
talents
or the
talents
are inherited by families or generations.
Moreover
, there are
children
who are interested in other fields of education
such
as science, maths, etc but have excavating
skills
in arts or
sports
. As an example, my friend has never learned how to draw from any school but she is capable of drawing realistic pictures of humans and animals so, her parents believe that she has natural
talents
for drawing.
Therefore
,
success
in the field of arts and
sports
can be achieved through the natural
skills
that a child is gifted with.
On the other hand
, I hold a view that with education and practical
skills
in art and
sports
,
children
can achieve anything in their life even whether they have inborn
talents
or not.
Thus
, physical activities and art need the techniques,
skills
, and practice throughout the years to be successful, just because a
person
has natural
talents
he or she is unable to achieve the target. If a
person
is talented in both activities from birth and the right teaching is provided that child can earn a high standard. To exemplify, my friend really wanted to do badminton but she was not capable of but with the classes and practising for days she was able to play in national teams.
Moreover
,
children
do not need to have natural
skills
to be
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good
sports
person
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or an artist with the module
skills
and practise they can . In conclusion, many individuals have inborn
skills
which they are capable of achieving artistic
talents
and
sports
and the majority of
children
are trained days and taught lessons to gain the
talents
which I believe that a
person
can be successful by shaping their
skills
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • natural talent
  • innate ability
  • genetic predisposition
  • nurture
  • nurturing
  • develop
  • cultivate
  • foster
  • encourage
  • inherit
  • unravel
  • reveal
  • demonstrate
  • evidence
  • proof
  • counterargument
  • counter
  • overcome
  • compensate
  • arguably
  • debate
  • controversial
  • persuasive
  • convincing
  • conclusive
  • critical
  • essential
  • crucial
  • vital
  • significant
  • prominent
  • noteworthy
  • imperative
  • compulsory
  • fundamental
  • compelling
  • persuasive
  • support
  • favor
  • oppose
  • disagree
  • acknowledge
  • consider
  • claim
  • view
  • belief
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