In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
It is crucial for future generations to be taught that achieving goals requires hard effort. While it is advantageous to instil that belief in the young, there are
also
a number of drawbacks.
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To begin
with the positives, we are currently living in a competitive world. Linking Words
Therefore
, young students have to exert their best to get high grades in order to have a well-paid job. That's why they have to be taught from a young age that Linking Words
although
the world is harsh, they can attain their dreams if they try their best. Linking Words
Moreover
, children need to know that anything is possible with the right plan and enough effort. Linking Words
For instance
, young athletes who took part in the Olympics were one-day normal kids. Linking Words
However
, with their parents’ encouragement, and strict training, they managed to succeed.
As for the negatives, putting too much load on young people can lead them to rebel. Linking Words
This
is because some parents always push their offspring to study hard so they can get good grades, Linking Words
for example
, or to train as hard as they can in order to win a sports competition. Linking Words
This
can lead some children to hate doing their homework or to make excuses to not attend their training. Another disadvantage is that some kids may feel stressed, or anxious. Linking Words
For example
, if students have difficulty in education, they can feel that they are not good enough, and they cannot meet their parents’ expectations leading them to be depressed.
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although
telling children to try hard enough is beneficial to prepare them for the real world, and raising their self-confidence, there are several demerits Linking Words
such
as rebellion and anxiety.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...