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Band 8.5

You have some library books that you are unable to return as a member of your family in another city has fallen sick and you have had to go and look after them. Write a letter to the library . In your letter you should * Explain the situation * Apologize for the inconvenience called * And say what you are going to do. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Ma'am, I am writing to express my sincere apology for missing the deadline to return the library
books
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. I have been taking care of my sister who fell sick three weeks ago in another country, and I was requested to handle all her needs. I am so sorry for any inconvenience that has caused.
This
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 situation arose unexpectedly, and I appreciate your understanding and assistance. Unfortunately, I still have these
books
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 with me because my sister has not yet recovered enough to be left alone.
However
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, I have already arranged for a temporary caregiver to take over for me, allowing me to return the
books
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 to the library. I hope
this
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 delay does not cause significant problems. It will take a few days, until next Tuesday, to finalize these arrangements. As soon as everything is settled, I will immediately return the
books
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 safely and quickly to the library. Once again, I apologise for the inconvenience. If there are any
further
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 details I need to address, please let me know. Sincere regards, Elisabeth Yellow

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task achievement
Try to mention specific book titles or the due date of the books to add more specific information.
task achievement
You thoroughly explained the situation and provided a clear plan of action to resolve it. This demonstrates strong task achievement.
coherence cohesion
The structure of the letter is logical and progresses smoothly from explaining the situation to apologizing and stating your plan.
task achievement
The letter maintains a consistent and appropriate tone throughout, which is suitable for formal correspondence.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph focuses on a single idea, contributing to the letter's overall clarity and coherence.
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