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Some children find some subjects example mathematics and philosophy difficult so these subjects should be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#children #subjects #mathematics #philosophy
In the
curriculam
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curriculum
 of school, there are some
subjects
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the
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juveniles which are compulsory like
mathmetics
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mathematics
 or
philosophy
. There are some debates about whether these
subjecst
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subjects
subject
 should be mandatory for
children
 or not because of their complexities. I personally agree with the situation because courses like
mathematic
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mathematics
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 and
philosophy
is
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essestial
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essential
 to
fulfill
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 the education of
children
.
Philosophy
 and Math are one of
the
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fundamental
area
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 of
knowledge
 and without attaining
knowledge
 regarding these
two
 areas
none
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 anyone cannot be properly educated.
However
, some youngsters
finds
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 these
subjects
 quite complex and difficult and
reluctant
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are reluctant
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 to earn the
knowledge
 of
philosophy
 and Math. But because of
this
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these
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difficulty
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 issues there is no way of making these
subjects
 optional as there are numerous ways of presenting these
two
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essential
subjetcs
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subjects
subject
 to the students. I am not agreeing with
this
 statement.
Mathmatics
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Mathematics
 and
philosophy
 can open the window of
knowledge
 in front of
children
 by which they can achieve cognitive
knowledge
, reasonable thinking and logic.
Therefore
, in the school
syllabus
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 these
two
 courses are often included to teach
children
 about
thsese
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these
two
subjects
. I personally believe that
,
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instead
 of
eleminating
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eliminating
 these
subjects
 from the
syllebus
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syllabus
 we can try to find out how we can make these complicated
subjects
enjoyble
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enjoyable
 and suitable for the age of
children
.
For instance
, there can be some puzzles or quizzes for students regarding math and
philosophy
 by which students can be more interested in these
two
subjects
. In conclusion, I can come to the point that, every branch of
knowledge
 needs to be learned by
children
 whether it is easy or hard. The solution is we have to find out how we make the lesson appropriate for their age and as well as better for them.
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