Q. Giving lectures in auditoriums to large numbers of students is an old way of teaching. With the technology available today there is no justification for it, and everything should be done online. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

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pandemic, technology has given us

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a new platform to conduct our virtual meetings and lectures. To a great extent, I too believe giving lectures in auditoriums to

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digital

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at our disposal.

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, if students gather in large

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as social distancing will not be observed effectively.

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for the lectures eventually adding to

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in seats available and

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coming. For eg, if

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of students are more than the capacity of

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might not turn out to be successful as attendees might without proper seating arrangement

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not be comfortable . All the above problems stated above can be easily mitigated with online meetings as no physical presence is required and

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will be successful as well.

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or online gathering, you will not be able to evaluate the student's expression and

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or might be doing some other activity in parallel to which presenter will not be aware. So in my conclusion, I would like to opine that , unless it is not imperative to have the meetings in person , it is always advisable to leverage the benefits of technology

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balance and yield results which are

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Topic Vocabulary:

in-person interaction
student engagement
multimedia tools
learning styles
blended learning
face-to-face sessions
interpersonal skills
access to technology
feelings of isolation
self-discipline
social skills
traditional classroom settings
educational accessibility
virtual classrooms
online platforms
technological advancements

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Fully explain your ideas

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Some people say that schools should invest money in the best equipment for their students. Others say it is better to invest money in hiring good teachers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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