Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email •Recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn •Explain how your friend could learn this sport •Suggest that you both learn this sport together Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear:....,

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Dear Kate, I hope you're well. I'm just writing to suggest you a new

yoga

exercise

that is

very trendy nowadays. As your interest in

this

type of sport, I believe that

this

yoga

will be your

favorite

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. You would be able to get fit and

also

come relax at the same time. I know that you like to exercise in a group with an advanced coach, but

this

new

yoga

definitely provides all your suitable conditions. It would be easy for you to learn because you have experience in typical

yoga

. After one month of continuously taking part in the session, you'll be an expert at it.

Additionally

, the gym is really close to your house and is possible for you to commute there by bike which is your favorite. I was wondering if you would like to join because I have decided to do

this

activity together and it will be amazing, I've always been interested in spending more time with you and

this

activity can be a rebuilding for our friendship. I look forward to catching up with you. Best wishes,

ostore

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Submitted by ostorr7213 on Wed Jun 19 2024

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Task Achievement

Consider providing more details on how to get started with the yoga activity, such as joining classes, online tutorials, or any specific coach recommendations. It will enhance your task response score for completeness.

Coherence and Cohesion

Try to create paragraphs that focus on single ideas to improve clarity. For instance, one paragraph can focus solely on the benefits of yoga, another on how to learn it, and another on suggesting you do it together.

Task Achievement

You have successfully addressed the main points of the task: recommending a new sport, explaining how to learn it, and suggesting that you both learn it together.

Task Achievement

Your tone is friendly and suitable for a letter to a friend, which makes the content more engaging and appropriate.

Coherence and Cohesion

Your letter has a clear structure with a greeting, body, and closing, which makes it easy to follow.

Coherence and Cohesion

The transition between recommending the sport and suggesting that you do it together was smoothly handled.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

185 words

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