Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while other think is unfair. Discuss both these of view and give your own opinion.

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is believe

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that everyone who is the best

of

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sport

can have a good deal and earn a lot of

money

than other jobs. Some

adividuals

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individuals

think

this

is definitely reasonable, while other think

this

is not fair. In

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essay,I will explain

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both points of view and will offer my own opinion at the conclusion. Some of the reasons that

variety

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of

people

suppose that unfair.

First

of all, they might think the

moneys

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money

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which

pays

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pay

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for

professionals

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professional

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of

sport

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sports

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is too much and

people

should share

money

with charity or poor

persons

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people

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.

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, using a little bit

money

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of money

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for cancer

center

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treatment to help various patients.

Second

of all, They feel

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like sportman

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sportman

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sportsman

sportsmen

or

sportwomen

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sportswomen

sport women

who are received a lot of value than their dedication, whilst other

major

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majors

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dedicate a lot of

knowledges

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knowledge

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either but get low

money

.

On the other hand

, a small population community think that they appreciate how these

people

effort to

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be successful

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successful

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. An example of

this

,

Ronaldo

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who

get

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the big deal and

have

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higher

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of

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living than

almost

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most

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people

in

sport

major because he had been double efforted and strived

instead

of

lazy

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being lazy

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in the past. He even still hard

practicing

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until now,

although

He has been the best one.

In addition

, when these persons

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stand

the

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top of

profession

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their profession

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and have

luxury

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the luxury

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of living. They often give their

money

for

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to

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many charity

oganizations

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organizations

such

as

the

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orphanages and

low income

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low-income

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people

center

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to help them improve their life. In conclusion, I feel that those

who

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whom

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success

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succeed

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in

sport

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sports

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fied

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field

they should be acknowledgement and they appreciate that position. I really

impress

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with them.