Today, the high of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the modern era , there are so many kinds of advertisements which help
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masses
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can get a good
product
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. Some people think that spending money on advertising is wasteful for those products which are well known in
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market
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the market
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,
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however
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others are against
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notion . I totally agree with the latter statement and will discuss it in the upcoming paragraphs .
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and foremost reason is individuals believe those products are well known in the
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and those have
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value they do not need
publicity
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about any of their
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product
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products
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because people trust
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is just for them those who are new in the field of brands .
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, individuals have faith that if the
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goes down
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how new
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trends in the
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maybe it will be closed due to high spending on advertisement.
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, in the year , 2010 a survey was conducted by UNO which was indicating about 75% of companies lost them due to a flop of
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in
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market
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then
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they closed their companies.
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, people think if the
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does not provide
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its
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new
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throw out ads
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how
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will know about the new taste and how more
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will know about the
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.
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, with the help of
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publicity
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a
brand
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can get more success in their business and one day they have enough money open stores in other countries or maybe they can get international rewards as well as the unemployment overcome due
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new stores .
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, a survey was conducted by red tape in the year 2019 which was indicating 20 %
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got work by opening new shops in different states and it happen through advertisement. In conclusion , in the case of any
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publicity
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is depend on creative ideas nor than spending high money on advertising and it's the best way to develop a business in any field.
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