Scientists and technologists are seems to be more valued in society than artists and muscians in what extent do you agree?

It is said that scientists and

technologists

provide more value to

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society

than

articts

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artists

and

musicians

. I totally disagree with

this

arguemt

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argument

.

Firstly

, if the value that

scientsts

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scientists

,

technologists

,

artists

and

musicians

serve to

sciety

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society

could be measured by the number of individuals who are saved by those professionals, there would not be

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between the value of scientists,

technologists

and

artists

and

musicians'

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musicians

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. As everybody knows, thanks to the progress of science and technology, the

sciety

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society

city

has been progressing and

large

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a large

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number of

people

's life has been changing more

convenience

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.

On the other hand

,

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an enourmous

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enourmous

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enormous

number of

people

are cured by

music

and

arts

created by

musicians

and

artists

. In my country,

for example

, during

pandemic

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the pandemic

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of covid-19, some

musicians

made tunes to encourage

people

and they posted these

video

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videos

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via SNS. As a

results

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result

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, many

people

were saved by

these

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this music

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music

and they gained energy for struggling confused

wold

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world

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.

Additionally

, if there was no

music

and no

arts

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art

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in

this

modern world,

these lack

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this lack

these lacks

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would affect

to

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apply

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the

evolutions

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evolution

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of science and technology.

Music

and

arts

are known as the essence which can grow

people

's

conceptional

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and perceptional abilities up.

These

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ability is

essencial

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essential

for generating

inovations

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innovations

which change our life

better

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the better

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.

For instance

, Shinya Yamanaka, one of the famous

japanese

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researcher

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researchers

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and

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who

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invented

super cell

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supercell

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for curing cancer, said that when he was a

children

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child

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, he tried to create some

arts

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art

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, and he thought that

these

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this

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activity is the

fundation

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foundation

of his creativity. Had not

the

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for the

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existence of

music

and

arts

,

crucial

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the crucial

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cancer's

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cancer

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problem would have remained

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an as

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as

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big issue.

In addition

, many

musicians

and

artists

support the

continuos

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continuous

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of

music

and art

caltures

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cultures

culture

captures

. In conclusion, I

reitarate

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reiterate

that

artists

and

musicians

and

artists

should not be said as lower valuable professionals than scientists and

technologists

.