The use of corporal punishment (physically hitting students) in schools is in decline, yet it should be used to improve behaviour. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the modern era , schools are very important to get knowledge and become to be more successful in life . Some masses think the use of
punishment
in an institution must be stopped and it should be used to improve behaviour ,
however
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others are against
this
notion . I totally agree with the latter view and will discuss it in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
, with the reasons for the formal view .
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and foremost reason is that people believe if the
teachers
do not punish pupils
then
their children do not get any kind of injuries from their
teachers
which will not affect their studies .
Furthermore
, many individuals believe if their child gets
punishment
the case of behaviour
then
their children become more mature about how to talk with elder people, so they never think to misbehave with others remind of the fear of
punishment
.
For example
, in the year , 2010 a survey was conducted by UNO which was indicating 55%
children
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become more mature about respecting others with the help of
punishment
.
On the other hand
, if the
teachers
do not punish their students
then
how they can get fear
about
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a teacher
or
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maybe they
to
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fail to get a good education without school
punishment
which will affect their future
.
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Moreover
, sometimes pupils make a disturbance in the class which
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other students' studies and maybe those who make noise in the class
they
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fail to pass their class so to remember
to
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all these facts
teachers
must be punished to maintain rules and regulations.
For instance
, in the year , 2015 many school results were good in percentage and they were rewarded by the government . In conclusion ,
teachers
should punish their students according to the mistakes they have done or did without giving them injuries .
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