The use of corporal punishment (physically hitting students) in schools is in decline, yet it should be used to improve behaviour. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the modern era , schools are very important to get knowledge and become to be more successful in life . Some masses think the use of

punishment

in an institution must be stopped and it should be used to improve behaviour ,

however

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others are against

this

notion . I totally agree with the latter view and will discuss it in the upcoming paragraphs.

To begin

, with the reasons for the formal view .

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and foremost reason is that people believe if the

teachers

do not punish pupils

then

their children do not get any kind of injuries from their

teachers

which will not affect their studies .

Furthermore

, many individuals believe if their child gets

punishment

the case of behaviour

then

their children become more mature about how to talk with elder people, so they never think to misbehave with others remind of the fear of

punishment

.

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, in the year , 2010 a survey was conducted by UNO which was indicating 55%

children

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become more mature about respecting others with the help of

punishment

.

On the other hand

, if the

teachers

do not punish their students

then

how they can get fear

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a teacher

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maybe they

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fail to get a good education without school

punishment

which will affect their future

.

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Moreover

, sometimes pupils make a disturbance in the class which

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affect

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other students' studies and maybe those who make noise in the class

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fail to pass their class so to remember

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all these facts

teachers

must be punished to maintain rules and regulations.

For instance

, in the year , 2015 many school results were good in percentage and they were rewarded by the government . In conclusion ,

teachers

should punish their students according to the mistakes they have done or did without giving them injuries .