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the resroration of old buidings in major cities around the world costs enormous amounts of money. this money would be better spent on new housing and road development .to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

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The
renovation
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 of old
buildings
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 in main towns over the world is costly .
this
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 expenditure can be invested
on
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in
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 new
buildings
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 and infrastructure improvement
such
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 as
road
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 development. I
totaly
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totally
 agree with
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 point of view
becouse
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because
effectiveness
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the effectiveness
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 of
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renovation
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old
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an old
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 building is
quectionable
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questionable
. Nowadays,the restoration of old
buildings
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 in major cities has become a trend
instead
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 of demolishing
becouse
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because
 some
people
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 inspire
old
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the old
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 look of the cities.
however
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 it
take
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place
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to place
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 a huge cost and time to
recration
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recreation
 of these
buidling
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building
buildings
 due to
requirement
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the requirement
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 of special technologies and materials,
althouth
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although
these buiding
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this buiding
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 are
resorated
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resorted
resonated
 by spending a huge amount of money , the
maintaing
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maintaining
main thing
 cost is
also
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 higher than modern
buildnigs
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buildings
. the one reason for
that is
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 many old
buildings
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 need more
enegy
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energy
as old
achiolgical
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archaeological
 design are not comply with new technological items
such
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 as ventilation . On the
othre
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other
other's
 hand, many
people
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 in the world are suffering from
lack
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a lack
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 of housing and other
amenties
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amenities
. if the government can spend money to improve housing and
infrastucure
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infrastructure
people
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's living stand can be improved .
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 ,
beveoping
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developing
road
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 and other
infrasturecure
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infrastructure
has
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have
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 a great influence
of
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on
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ecomny
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economy
develoment
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development
.
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building
builing
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,builing
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 a new
road
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 to
countryside
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the countryside
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, Industries ,which are located in the country area, can get
profit
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a profit
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form
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from
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 product exporting . these advantages not only for the company but
aslo
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also
whole
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for whole
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 the country. In conclusion, despite
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renovation
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the renovation
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 of old
buildnigs
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buildings
is
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being
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 costly, the effectiveness of
renovation
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 is not considerable,
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However
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 if
the
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apply
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this
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 money spend on
road
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 and housing
project
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projects
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, it helps to improve
people
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 living stand and
economy
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the economy
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 of the country

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