the resroration of old buidings in major cities around the world costs enormous amounts of money. this money would be better spent on new housing and road development .to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
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renovation
of old buildings
in main towns over the world is costly . this
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buildings
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the effectiveness
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an old
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buildings
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because
people
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archaeological
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infrastructure
people
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developing
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infrastructure
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economy
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development
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the renovation
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the economy
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