the resroration of old buidings in major cities around the world costs enormous amounts of money. this money would be better spent on new housing and road development .to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

The
renovation
of old
buildings
in main towns over the world is costly .
this
expenditure can be invested
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new
buildings
and infrastructure improvement
such
as
road
development. I
totaly
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totally
agree with
this
point of view
becouse
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because
effectiveness
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the effectiveness
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of
renovation
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old
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an old
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building is
quectionable
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questionable
. Nowadays,the restoration of old
buildings
in major cities has become a trend
instead
of demolishing
becouse
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because
some
people
inspire
old
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the old
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look of the cities.
however
it
take
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place
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a huge cost and time to
recration
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recreation
of these
buidling
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building
buildings
due to
requirement
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the requirement
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of special technologies and materials,
althouth
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although
these buiding
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are
resorated
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resorted
resonated
by spending a huge amount of money , the
maintaing
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maintaining
main thing
cost is
also
higher than modern
buildnigs
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buildings
. the one reason for
that is
many old
buildings
need more
enegy
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energy
as old
achiolgical
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archaeological
design are not comply with new technological items
such
as ventilation . On the
othre
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other
other's
hand, many
people
in the world are suffering from
lack
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of housing and other
amenties
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amenities
. if the government can spend money to improve housing and
infrastucure
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infrastructure
people
's living stand can be improved .
Moreover
,
beveoping
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developing
road
and other
infrasturecure
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infrastructure
has
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a great influence
of
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ecomny
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economy
develoment
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development
.
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building
builing
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,builing
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a new
road
to
countryside
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the countryside
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, Industries ,which are located in the country area, can get
profit
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a profit
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form
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from
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product exporting . these advantages not only for the company but
aslo
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also
whole
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the country. In conclusion, despite
renovation
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the renovation
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of old
buildnigs
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buildings
is
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costly, the effectiveness of
renovation
is not considerable,
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if
the
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this
money spend on
road
and housing
project
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projects
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, it helps to improve
people
living stand and
economy
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the economy
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of the country
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