In some countries, celebrities earn more than doctors. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

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In some countries, celebrities earn more than doctors. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

Fully explain your ideas

The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. Do the advantages of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantages

Some feel that governments should prioritize healthcare instead of other important areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the future, more people will choose to go on holidays in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent time economic growth has made some people richer in both developed and developing countries. While studies show that people in developing countries are happier now than before, people in developed countries are no happier than they were before.

Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are marries or single. some people say this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.