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Project: Restoration and revival of Existing
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, develop
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, manage the entitlement processes, and implement improvements • Providing a detailed set of landscaping designs based on client requirements, sustainability, aesthetics, climate and location • Active involvement in
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 development,
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 planning, planting
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, details and construction documentation • Reviewing and providing approvals of Landscape planning and construction documents for private, residential, and public parks, institutional and restoration and revival of
water
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 bodies projects • Monitoring contractor’s
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 activities for conformance with approved
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, specifications,
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 analysis, and standards • Develop compelling
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 package presentations and ensure excellent client service • Designing and creating
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 set of projects like Waterbody at Rajokari, Supplementary Drain, Jaunti Cultural
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 while guiding clients throughout all stages of their
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-specific project • Overseeing all shop drawings (including conceptual, general arrangement, levels and grading, drainage, material, furniture, planting plan-trees, shrubs and grasses plan, sections, details, irrigation layout)
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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