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In some countries, celebrities earn more than doctors. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

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Project: Restoration and revival of Existing
Water
 body | Supplementary Drain | Jaunti Cultural
Park
 | Eco-sensitive
Water
Park
 | Private Residence/ Sustainable
Design
 •Working directly with clients to advance master
plans
/small area/corridor
plans
, develop
site
plans
, manage the entitlement processes, and implement improvements • Providing a detailed set of landscaping designs based on client requirements, sustainability, aesthetics, climate and location • Active involvement in
design
 development,
site
 planning, planting
design
, details and construction documentation • Reviewing and providing approvals of Landscape planning and construction documents for private, residential, and public parks, institutional and restoration and revival of
water
 bodies projects • Monitoring contractor’s
site
 activities for conformance with approved
plans
, specifications,
site
 analysis, and standards • Develop compelling
design
 package presentations and ensure excellent client service • Designing and creating
detailed
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 set of projects like Waterbody at Rajokari, Supplementary Drain, Jaunti Cultural
Park
, and Eco-sensitive
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park
 while guiding clients throughout all stages of their
site
-specific project • Overseeing all shop drawings (including conceptual, general arrangement, levels and grading, drainage, material, furniture, planting plan-trees, shrubs and grasses plan, sections, details, irrigation layout)
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