Many work people today work at home rather than in an office. Are there more advantages to working remotely than disadvantages?
Nowadays, it is known that a big part of the population is working remotely, especially in the most popular business.
Moreover
, many are conscious of the increase in the evolution of new technologies. Linking Words
However
, some are wondering if is it really more advantageous than working in the office. Linking Words
Thus
, the following essay takes a look at both sides of the argument.
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First
of all, in order to answer the prior popular wondering we can take a view of the advantages. Linking Words
Hence
, it can be seen that people are more and more interested in having time with their immediate family, for Linking Words
this
reason, having the opportunity to stop commuting to work is a big principal benefit. Linking Words
For instance
, many agree that the upbringing of your children is heavy duty and requires more free time. Linking Words
Additionally
, in a similar fashion, commuting is provoking workers to cope with several problems, Linking Words
for example
is well known about the waste of time by traffic jams. Linking Words
Moreover
, a fundamental destacable point; is that the contamination is caused by transport media, as is known we are in a trouble about the environment.
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Nevertheless
, as with all statements we can find some disadvantages, Linking Words
such
as in the companies area, if you are living alone, you will pass a lot of hours without any interaction except through your computer. Linking Words
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this
might provoke mental health illness, Linking Words
for example
, depression with perhaps difficulty in both, communication and social skills in your daily life. Unfortunately, another point is that the internet can be tiny dangerous, Linking Words
for instance
, connection problems and particularly cybercrime.
In short, we can see that online working has been pretty valuable for those who have family and is helping in a certain way to decrease pollution. Linking Words
On the other hand
, for those who are susceptible to depression or social problems is not recommended.Linking Words
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