Men and women are different in term of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women. Do you agree or disagree?

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It certainly cannot be denied that
men
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and
women
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are different in
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terms
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of their references and capabilities.
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, some
jobs
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are better done by
men
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done by
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men
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and others by
women
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. I definitely agree with
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situation. The reasons
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this
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are twofold.
First
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and foremost, it is vitally important that nowadays, there are various types of
jobs
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. Some of them are better done by
men
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that
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than
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construction,
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and miner
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miner
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. Opposing to
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other
jobs
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are well done by
women
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.
For instance
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, taking care of children at
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or like babysitters.
Women
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cannot do difficult, hard
works
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work
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and
men
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cannot do work that
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to
the
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women
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. It is my belief that everyone should do work that
are
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suitable for
themselves
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them
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.
Secondly
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and more importantly there are some
jobs
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that cannot be
imagine
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them
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without
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or
women
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. One of them is
professional
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a professional
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artist. Another
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this
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kind of job is
singer
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a singer
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. We cannot imagine these occupations without
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or ladies.
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,
government
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the government
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need both genders of workers.
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areLadies
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necessary to clean,
cooking
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and cooking
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as
employeers
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employers
employees
. Of course, ladies cannot be
butcher
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butchers
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or construction
worker
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workers
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,
however
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, some
women
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work as skilled-craftsman by force.
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is a sorrowful situation
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the world.
Furthermore
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, our country
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to multiply our homeland with workers
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as businessmen and
employeers
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employers
employees
. By way of my conclusion, I believe that
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issue is likely to become even more important in the future as
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the border
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border
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borders
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between countries become increasingly blurred. It,
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, demands
out
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apply
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further
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consideration.

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