Computer is becoming an essential part of education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of computer use in education and give your own opinion.
computer
is a modern technology that important for Add an article
the computer
a computer
students
and worker
. Every Fix the agreement mistake
workers
students
usually have one or more Change to a singular noun
student
computer
for
Change preposition
to
support
their study. Change the verb form
supporting
Similarly
workers
, they Add the comma(s)
,workers
use
a computer
for their work activities and amusements.
On the one hand, computer
is useful for Add an article
the computer
a computer
it
users. Correct pronoun usage
its
Firstly
, Add an article
the computer
a computer
computer
can be used for internet access. People can Fix the agreement mistake
computers
use
computers for search information as their wish. For instance
, students
can use
computers for
search literature, journals, books, website, youtube, and other information Change preposition
to
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
related
to their lessons or needs. Add a missing verb
is related
Students
can use
computers for communication and interaction to
other people Change preposition
with
in
the whole world. They can Change preposition
around
use
email, skype, and social media for
Change preposition
to
send
a message to Change the verb form
sending
other person
. Change the wording
another person
other people
Secondly
, people can be used computer
for writing, Fix the agreement mistake
computers
analyze
data, and Wrong verb form
analysing
presentation
. They can install some Replace the word
presenting
application
Fix the agreement mistake
applications
such
as microsoft
office and other Change the capitalization
Microsoft
application
to manage their task. Fix the agreement mistake
applications
Thirdly
, Add an article
the computer
a computer
computer
can be used for amusement. Fix the agreement mistake
computers
For instance
, we can be used Correct article usage
a computer
computer
for playing games, watching Fix the agreement mistake
computers
Add an article
a movie
the movie
movie
, listening Fix the agreement mistake
movies
music
and Change preposition
to music
others
. It can make our mind more Correct quantifier usage
other
relax
while working.
Wrong verb form
relaxed
However
, Add an article
the computer
a computer
computer
can make Fix the agreement mistake
computers
negative
Correct article usage
a negative
effect
Fix the agreement mistake
effects
to
Change preposition
on
it
users. Correct pronoun usage
their
Negative
effect is usually related Add an article
The negative
A negative
with
Change preposition
to
health
. There are health
problem
Fix the agreement mistake
problems
can
be generated Correct pronoun usage
that can
of
Change preposition
by
Add an article
the computer
a computer
computer
. Fix the agreement mistake
computers
For example
, chronic diseases such
as cardiovascular disease, obesity, metabolic diseases, etc. Other health
problems is
eye disorders Change the verb form
are
such
as computer
vision syndrome. Too much working
with Replace the word
work
Add an article
a computer
computer
can make Fix the agreement mistake
computers
someone
do less
physical activity so it can be Add an article
a less
risk
factor for getting chronic diseases.
Add an article
a risk
Finally
, It seems advisible
that Correct your spelling
advisable
someone
to
stay working Fix the infinitive
apply
use
Correct word choice
and use
computer
for learning, writing, and Correct article usage
a computer
amusements
, but Fix the agreement mistake
amusement
someone
need
to keep their body Change the verb form
needs
health
with Replace the word
healthy
do
Change the verb form
doing
physical
activity Add an article
a physical
such
as routine exercise. Someone
also
need
to monitor their eye Change the verb form
needs
health
condition and keep it healthy.Submitted by meis.koraag on
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