some people think that robots are very important to humans future development while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society . discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people argue that
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machine with artificial
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of people, while other
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argue that
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of
robots
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disadvantages
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the community. In many
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countries
,
robots
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crucial
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economy
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development as they engage in not only
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manufacturing
but
also
service
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sector
.
Robots
can survive
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environment
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condition may be unfavourable to human ,
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contains
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gases in
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atmosphere
.and
also
automated machine are used for car
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manufacturing
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because
they can work long hours continuously and
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cases their effectiveness is higher than human.
Therefore
global productivity has increased significantly ,which is caused to future human development. I believe
this
is a great advantage of
robots
.
On the other hand
,
robots
can be used in
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military
and
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such
as harm to people and other
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becouse
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because
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their owner's
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rules
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may not consider human felling and other
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values.
for example
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company
has
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built
robots
for military use , after
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they deactivated those
robots
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one of
robots
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automatically reactivated and
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connected
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therefore
there
robots
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the
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society unless imposition
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regulations
to make
robots
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that
this
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robots
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can be eliminated by taking strong
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. In conclusion,
Robots
can
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influence
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influence
posivly
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positively
to improve human development by
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incrase
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increase
the global
productivy
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productivity
,
however
,
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might be dangerous unless controlled
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • automation
  • artificial intelligence (AI)
  • efficiency
  • productivity
  • hazardous environments
  • personalized learning
  • job displacement
  • economic inequality
  • social unrest
  • privacy concerns
  • surveillance capabilities
  • malfunction
  • reliance
  • technical failures
  • human skills
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