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Scientists and technologists are seems to be more valued in society than artists and muscians in what extent do you agree?

#scientists #technologists #society #artists #muscians
It is irrefutable that in the modern world,
people
 like scientists and technologists are more valuable
for
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society. I completely agree with
this
 statement because of a number of reasons.
First
 of all,
people
 who tried to do beneficial things for the humanity and world
appreciated
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 by humans all the time.
For instance
, when a scientist invented something new in the past, he would get plenty of awards
such
 as noble, and become a well-known person.
Consequently
, many
people
 would hear about him;
in addition
, they would be grateful for his discovery.
Therefore
,
technologists
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technologists'
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 and
scientists
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 discoveries
last
 for a long time. As
a
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illustriation
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illustration
, if a musician or artist makes a song, his music will be
trend
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 for a short time;
however
, as long as a technologist makes a new thing which is very
curicual
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curricula
 for the world,
people
 can use it forever. Electricity is one of the discoveries that will
last
 forever since humans can not live without it.
Moreover
, those inventions
which
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made by scientists
as well as technologists
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, as well as technologists,
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 are the new
beakthroughts
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breakthroughs
breakthrough
 for
the
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other fields
such
 as
teachnology
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technology
 and
medical
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.
For example
, when
people
 found
about
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 DNA, they would learn
the
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humans'
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body
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 structure and cells.
As a result
, they managed to find a lot of new medicines for
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genetic and deadly diseases
such
 as cancer. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that
people
 who make
others
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 life easier than before are more imperative. So,
people
 like to give value to science more than
entertain
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.
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