Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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on every

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and society as a whole. Whether or not,

this

is a huge drawback

impact

, is a moot point. I,

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, completely agree with the given assertion on the basis of climbing mental disorders and

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crisis

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.

To begin

with, the main reason is that social platforms cause some mental illnesses. To put it another way, when someone

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some pics and videos which show an unreal sense of

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life, they

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compare

their lifestyle to other.

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, mental disorders would be gone up little by little. Comparing

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two life with using merely some pics could not

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result. Depression,

for instance

, is

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that is

surged in recent years, and

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from

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platforms on individuals. Having said that,

however

, increasing mental disorders is not the only

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causative

factor. Another compelling argument is that social sites could be a social crisis.

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to say,

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to going up social network influence, it is observed that a pic or clip could be

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immediately, and many users share that.

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, it will so difficult to distinguish the right from the fake. In fact,

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circumstance could be a real social crisis which nobody can foster. Some groups utilize

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aspect of modern

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social

commiunication

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communication

to achieve their goals. In conclusion,

although

there are many views on social network

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impact

, my firm conviction is that they have

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enomerous

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on all people and

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nation