Some people say the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals

Less part of our population of the earth says that in 21-century the main problem of environmental is in loss of particular species of flora and fauna
in other words
animals and plants. There is no doubt that in a century where manufacturing and production are developed
accordingly
waste
and
trash
from fabrics and factories is risen and it is worse affected on the natural planet. Crushing the environment will lead to the destruction of the main part of the earth.
Waste
from medical clinics, laboratories, fabrics and basic parts of rubbish from everyday living is in many ways thrown away in lakes, rivers and oceans. Used syringes, needles and the packaging of medical products cause infection of the underwater part of the sea. And not always
trash
from houses and offices disposed of, in many ways they are thrown away. And the highest dangerous cause of oil
waste
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is because it spreads easily. To solve these problems I want to suggest solutions like a fine and tax to
waste
. It needs to rise the fine percentage and there should be a ban on
waste
disposal, and
instead
of air and natural ,pollution factories should reuse all of the
trash
and find a way how to do it. All of the
pollutions
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worse affected, especially if we think about our future and successors in no case we not should bury garbage underground. The only solve it is Hight taxes and reusing
trash
.
For example
supermarkets nowadays often sell eco packages that are not torn and can be used not only once. There are many types of pollution: air, sea, ground, plastic, radioactive and etc. And none of them is better than the other because all of them polluted nature
similarly
and because of
this
our life and life of our children are in danger.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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