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What are the benefits of genetically modified food? Are there any risks associated with these food items?

#food #risks #items
Food
 is an essential part of
humans
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survival
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 in
this
 world. Most foods are derived from genetic engineering.
However
,
people
 have concerns over their safety. There is much debate on the pros and cons of using GMOs. In
this
 essay, I will elaborate on the benefits and risk factors associated to consume these
food
items
 and
thus
 lead to a logical conclusion. There are myriad reasons to agree with the meritorious side.
First
 of all, climate change and extreme weather events may be disrupting agricultural lands. To meet the demands of
food
 supplies, scientists introduced the GMF.
Moreover
, with the help of genetic
food
, can grow plants from poor quality soil.
Besides
, these
food
items
 contain fat, a nutrient which boosts
people
's health.In short, the fall inducement of genetic
food
's brighter side is self-evident.
By contrast
, the thrones of the area cannot be neglected. The most worrying aspect is health issues. A recent survey conducted by scientists found that to consume over genetic
food
items
, cancer and heart diseases are associated with it. Another observation in
this
 regard is the change of DNA in the human body by consuming GMF.
As a result
, immune system levels became weak.
For instance
, many
people
 died during the covid times due to the low immune system.
Hence
, it's apparent why many
people
 prefer to consume non-genetic
food
items
. In recapitulation, I reiterate that there are innumerable strong factors supporting that genetic
food
 plays a significant role to supply the demand for
food
 supply due to overpopulation and extreme weather.
However
, the negative influence cannot be ignored, scientist need to find a feasible method to sort out these issues.
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