Even through globalisation affects the world's economics in a very positive way it's negative side should be not be forgotten. Discuss both view and give an opinion.

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always debatable and has now become more controversial. Many individuals claim that it has numerous advantages but, others reject

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notion and believe that it has countless disadvantages. In my , opinion the position of

globalisation

appears to be more rational. In

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elaborate on the positive and negative impact of

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trend and

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will lead to a logical conclusion. There are myriads of reasons which will

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explain

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argument. Yet, the most preponderant fact is that globalization plays a vital role in the 21st century, which has immense influence among youngsters, and, middlers. Another pivotal aspect is that it is amiable for business

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example the survey conducted by the prestigious university Oxford revealed that most of the developing countries

such

as India, China, and Pakistan improving their economic growth with the help of

globalisation

. Needless to say, all these merits stand in good stead.

However

, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of

this

trend.

Although

, the most alarming one is that it is diminishing the value of the local souvenir

such

as Indian attires, and ancient tools in India.

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ruined the cultural and traditional values of these regions

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the English language rather than their native language. Moving

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, it is pertinent to mention that the article published in the eminent newspaper depicts that the cause of

globalisation

is hazardous and harmless for youth

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the fact they avoid their own religious and traditional activities for

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, occasions and, marriage rituals.

Hence

, it is clearly stated why many are against

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problem. In conclusion,

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the information aforementioned above, one can reach

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conclusion that

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of

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globalisation

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instrumental indeed.

Nevertheless

, its potential influence should not be overlooked either.